Commute part 2
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Nothing happened, though, until the train pulled into the next stop from where I got on. A fresh crush of people pushed their way onto the train and we were all crammed onto the carriage. I was starting to wonder whether this was worth it all, when I felt it. A hand on my butt. The guy was trying to make pasimple, brushing his hand against my butt every time the train jostled. But the way he touched it couldn’t disguise the fact that he was touching me on purpose. My heart started beating faster, and I could feel myself starting to get wet. I tried to turn my head to see how the guy looked, but it was too cramped and I couldn’t turn around completely to get a good look. I could smell strong body odor, but then that could have been from any of the other people on the train. The hand on my butt was rough with calluses, so that suggested that he was not a stranger to manual labor. We went that way for a few minutes. The train was slow-going, what with it being packed so full of people. I felt more daring now, as the lust started to course through my veins. I pressed my butt against his hand, and reached down behind me to pull him closer against me. As if it mattered. With so many people on the train, we were as close as two people could possibly be and not be on top of each other. He was wearing shorts, and from what I could feel they were pretty worn and tattered. His legs were thick with curly hair. I felt him squeeze my butt firmly this time, and then he leaned his face close to my ear and whispered “Gusto mo ba yan?†With his hand on my butt I was starting to get really excited. My breathing was coming faster and faster. I closed my eyes, just focusing on the sensation of his rough hands on my butt. I didn’t want to look at him, because by then I knew that he probably didn’t look all that good and that if I looked at his face then I might just get turned off and the fantasy would ruin itself. So I focused on the sensations and let him and my imagination do the work. I murmured a soft but intelligible “Mm-hmm.†It was the most I could do without letting it turn into an outright moan. I pressed myself harder against him. I could feel his cock poking at me through his shorts. His hand slipped under my skirt and he was kneading my butt now, not just stroking it, but rolling it about in both hands, teasing the soft, pliant flesh. He was crushing it in his hand, squeezing it hard enough that I wondered if it would leave a mark. I was breathing fast and hard by now. I could hear him getting excited as well, his voice changing, getting huskier, his breathing coming quicker as well, as he whispered all sorts of nasty things into my ear. He told about how sexy I was, how nice my butt was, and what a dirty and horny girl I was. Normally I would have slapped anyone who tried to say that to me, but damn, I was really in the mood by then. He slid his hand around my waist and into my panties. I tried to spread my legs as wide as the limited space could allow but there was just no doing it. I felt him gasp into my ear when his hand slid against my freshly-shaved, hairless pussy. “Aba. Ang libog mo ha. Ang sarap naman niyan kainin.†He said. He started running his finger up and down my slit, tracing the line of it slowly, applying enough pressure to feel good but not enough to penetrate me. God, he was such a tease. He sure knew what he was doing. I couldn’t help but gasp when he slid his finger inside though. His finger was thick and rough. The friction of it was driving me insane. He started sliding it in and out slowly but as deep as it would go. I clutched at his shorts. I didn’t know how long I could stop myself from moaning out load. He pumped it in and out, in and out, faster and faster. I was thankful that the train masked the wet slurping sounds I’m sure that my dripping pussy was making. It was stroking almost the entire insides of my pussy, sliding against my clit, his knuckle brushing up against the ridge of my opening. It was fantastic. His finger was wet and slippery from my juices. He would plunge it inside and then wiggle it around a bit, trying to work it as deep as it would go, trying to touch everything inside me, touching me in ways no one ever had before. Then he would pull it out, drag it against my clit, and then slide it in again. I couldn’t take it anymore. I started to moan softly, the gasps coming out from my mouth in quick succession. I was holding on to him for support. My legs were trembling from the pleasure. Had he pulled away, I would have collapsed onto the floor. He was moaning softly into my ear. I was too. His other hand reached around me again and under my jacket and my bra. He took my left nipple in between two fingers and rolled it around, teasing it to delicate hardness. He pinched it softly, tweaking it, and then kneading the whole of my boob in his hand. He was finger-fucking me in earnest now, just in and out, in and out, fast and hard. My hand wandered down between my legs, rubbing my clit hard, while his finger pistoned in and out of my tight, wet, hot pussy. The pleasure was absolutely extreme. It was shooting all over my body, I didn’t know anymore where to concentrate, whether on his thick finger fucking into me, or on his hand on my breast. I pressed my butt against his hard cock, grinding it. He pushed against me as well. I knew he must have been aching to have it inside me. Truth be told, I wanted it inside me as well. We didn’t have to wait long before we both got our wishes.
(To be Continued)
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hmmmm ???? meron narin ako
hmmmm ????
meron narin ako nakita dati nyan nung minsan napa sakay ako sa LRT... pero sa tingin ko mag syota yata sila... ndi ko nalang pinansin kc nga naman nakakahiya... hehehe pero pota pasimple lang sila akala nila ndi ko rin sila mapapansin...heheh
nice post, really really
nice post, really really nice!! wish i was that guy :-) plz plz continue...tnx azia for sharing..
Geez... its a situation I
Geez... its a situation I cant seem to imagine... I mean.. its kinda hard.. hehehe... nice share...
"There are infinite number of possibilities"
.....daring,,,,what a
.....daring,,,,what a thrill....
fantastic story !!! galing
fantastic story !!! galing !!
Honestly, this is one hell
Honestly, this is one hell of a post. And i like the way you describe the situation, though its a bit hard to imagine that it could really happen. I like your being adventurous. Keep it up girl. And the way you write is just superb! Good work Azia.
"Seduce my mind, to capture my heart..."
"Seduce my mind, capture my heart, forever..."
this is a great great great
this is a great great great story, tamang tama lang para naman mapatunayan ng pinoyspy erotica na this is a site of erotic stories, and not JUST sex stories, hindi yun puro sex na lang, great story again, keep it up girl, talaga nothing beats life's drama, pero isa pang additional point lang... araw araw ako sumasakay ng LRT 1, at sa takbo ng story na to, sa pagkakakwento, parang imposible yata yan, parang lang naman, for me, this is highly improbable pero hindi naman imposible.. kaya i think this is true, pero tibay nyo ha, nakayanan nyo yun dun, it is really out of my imagination capacity.. as in no way girl.. pero again... keep it up, ill be waiting for p3
YOU are the result of YOUR own decisions ONLY
wow, what a story! yeah it
wow, what a story! yeah it seems improbable nga. pero that's what makes it so hot.;) i hope you don't leave us hanging like the other posts here! i love it!=)
wow there's nothing i can
wow there's nothing i can say. but u have GUTS
Great story. Reminds me of
Great story. Reminds me of my days when i still ride the LRT to go to school. I did something like that once, but yours... i cant find words to describe it in a good sort of way. All i did was just butt/boob pinching/squeezing, and it never got far than that. Anyway, i still sometimes do it in the MRT. ^_^
nice story. unlikely sa LRT
nice story. unlikely sa LRT but I believe it could happen. I worked in Japan for 3 years and I have witnessed a lot of these happen before my eyes dahil sa Japan pinupuno talaga ang trains duon and the travel time is much longer kaya marami pwedeng gawin. Kahit sa akin nangyari din ang train escapades but not as wild.
Looking forward to the continuation. More power to you betcha!
great new comments ha...
great new comments ha... dati nga rin may nakita ako sa LRT, chumachansing yun isang guy dun kakatuwa pasimple pa pero nahahalata rin naman nun girl kaya medyo hindi rin nakakaporma masyado yun guy, mejo maluwag pa yun lrt nun kaya madali mapansin, anyways, la pa po ba yun next part... sabi nga nung isa d2 sana wag mo kami bibitinin, waaaa over 1 week na la pa kasunod, cge sana naman dumating na yun part 3
YOU are the result of YOUR own decisions ONLY
where's the next bit? i'm
where's the next bit? i'm bitin.=(
me too
me too
hehe
yups me too... looking
yups me too... looking forward to the continuation hehehe
ADVICE to the writer - mate,
ADVICE to the writer - mate, if you're seriuos about being a writer. use your own bloody imagination!!! don't plagiarise!! i read this story before... the only difference is you made it LOCAL.
no, the only difference is
no, the only difference is that it's a true story.;p c'mon dude honestly there's no point in plagiarising a story now is there? popularity? you've gotta be kidding me. if you don't like it, don't read it. but don't spoil the fun for the other people here.
attaboy way to go
attaboy way to go
hehe
thanks for the vote of
thanks for the vote of confidence, quadruple! oh cmon. are you saying that every sexual situation that sems similar to another is plagiarism? if so every other person who's written something is guilty of it. if you can find and post the story which you say is the same, that is, the story with the EXACT same writing except with edited places and background story elements, then by all means i'll bow down and you win. but if it's only the same situation, then wtf, that's not plagiarism! plagiarism is cut and paste. i did nothing of the sort. i'm merely describing events that happened at a certain point of my life. if you don't believe it, don't read it.=/
Hey betcha dont get
Hey betcha dont get affected. I believe you. Let him say what he says and let him prove it.In the meantime youre doing great
hehe
oo nga naman, kung meron
oo nga naman, kung meron ngang ganun na exact foreign version nitong story na ito eh di i post mo d2 at makita nating lahat para hindi na tayo mabitin... hahahaha kasi la pa yun part 3 eh... tsaka para sa akin nagpapasabog lang ng kalokohan yan si dinamita (baka pati ito plagiarism na rin ha, kasi ginamit ko name mo sa tagalog), kasi kung kinopya lang talaga itong story na ito at ginawang local, eh di hindi na sana tayo mabibitin, hindi na sana matatagalan yun writer na mag post kasi nangongopya lang naman sya, di ba?
kaya yan advice to dynamite, shut up na unless you got the evidence and advice to betcha_thought_so_too, sana naman po lumabas na yun part 3 para hindi na bitin itong kwento :-) great story
YOU are the result of YOUR own decisions ONLY
I didn't mean to spoil it.
I didn't mean to spoil it. for those who haven't read it - keep on reading it.
sorry peeps. i'm just 1 of those who is trying to keep people honest. from time to time, i read here to relax my mind and have a laugh at the stories... then you come across a story that is not original - hmmm. i think i'll just keep my "constructive" criticism to myself next time. plagiarism is not simply cut & paste - it's actually claiming other peoples ideas/stories (without acknowledging them - the source/original).
AND - last but not least - i have to read it to know the story... now that i have. i'll move on to the next one. he he he
PEACE!
plagiarism is, like you
plagiarism is, like you said, when you steal someone else's thoughts/ideas, but you see this isn't a piece of fiction it's a slightly fictionalized relation of true events (of course i can't remember what exacty and in what order everything happened), but the main idea is yeah, i had sex on a train. so what, everybody who writes about sex is plagiarising because someone's done it before?
nagka doble pa post ko kaya
nagka doble pa post ko kaya iniba ko na lng tong mali... bawal pala mag delete ng comment d2? pwede lang i edit?
YOU are the result of YOUR own decisions ONLY
lagot ka dynamite
lagot ka dynamite pasasabugin ka na nyan ni betcha_thought_so_too, hahahaha! how many people can actually say that ha? i had sex on a train, wow, as in actual petting talaga ha, and true story talaga ha, sana po lumabas na po yun part 3, please
YOU are the result of YOUR own decisions ONLY
ok where and what site
ok where and what site please?
hehe
hope you guys like this for
hope you guys like this for real, and hope she finishes it or maybe she is still busy with the guy hehe
hehe
which leaves us with
which leaves us with what?
Commute Part 2.5?
or a Part 3 which is the real continuation of the series?
"Intent and outcome rarely coincide."
--- Neil Gaiman, The Sandman
"Intent and outcome rarely coincide."
--- Neil Gaiman, The Sandman
ey newb here.. hmm. nice
ey newb here.. hmm. nice story actually. cant wait for the next one. reading the story reminds me of a hentai cartoon i watched about a year ago.
anyway, spoiler na. :( parang alam ko na next part "i had sex on the train" line pointed it out. :( sad.
oh well. let's see how the story flies. masubukan nga to minsan sa mrt hehehehe...
"parurusahan ko kayo sa ngalan ng buwan..."
to err is human, to forgive
to err is human, to forgive is divine..
to err is human, to forgive is divine..